加拿大商科研究生GMAT寫(xiě)作精選范文干貨分享
GMAT作文的備考,考生能做的比較有限,除了練好基本寫(xiě)作功夫外,也只有背模板是比較靠譜的方法。GMAT備考
Winter's gone,we are studying the Analytical Writing Assessment(AWA)task of the GMAT.Questions used are all from the Pool of Sample Topics available in the Official Guide.Be prepared for that some of the questions will look familiar when you actually take the test.
Now,we will be reading the question:
「Question No.88」
The following appeared in an ad for a book titled How to Write a Screenplay for a Movie:
“Writers who want to succeed should try to write film screenplays rather than books,since the average film tends to make greater profits than does even a best-selling book.It is true that some books are also made into films.However,our nation’s film producers are more likely to produce movies based on original screenplays than to produce films based on books,because in recent years the films that have sold the most tickets have usually been based on original screenplays.”
以三個(gè)邏輯疑點(diǎn)為例,示范關(guān)于邏輯疑點(diǎn)的討論/寫(xiě)作
First,the comparison between a book and a screenplay makes no sense,←首先,直接指出疑點(diǎn)的核心。然后,具體分析我質(zhì)疑的原因→because of the argument’s lack of information regarding how the royalty of a best-selling book is calculated and regarding how that of a screenplay is calculated.A writer of a screenplay may be paid a tiny portion of the profits the film generates,and the tiny portion may be less than the generous royalty a writer may be paid from the sales of a best-selling book,although the book is less profitable than the film.【常見(jiàn)邏輯疑點(diǎn):偷換概念?!?/p>
Second,it is likely that a writer who writes books gets paid both from the publication of their books and the production of films based on their books,while a writer of screenplays only benefits from one source of income,which is the screenplays alone.Since the double-income may be greater than the single-income,writing books may be more financially beneficial.【常見(jiàn)邏輯疑點(diǎn):多個(gè)變量問(wèn)題。】
小總結(jié):寫(xiě)作中的兩種常用句型三,
是“可能性”句型(關(guān)鍵詞被黃色高亮標(biāo)出)
Lastly,since success includes a wide range of achievements,including financial gains,winning awards,intellectual or artistic influence,and sociocultural status,writers who want to succeed in terms of fame may not write screenplays,which may bring good economic rewards but may bring little fame.【常見(jiàn)邏輯疑點(diǎn):范疇問(wèn)題】
加拿大商科研究生GMAT寫(xiě)作精選范文干貨分享
其它邏輯疑點(diǎn)提示:
【常見(jiàn)邏輯疑點(diǎn):偷換概念?!?/p>
【常見(jiàn)邏輯疑點(diǎn):時(shí)間問(wèn)題:提示詞:in recent years】
【常見(jiàn)邏輯疑點(diǎn):地點(diǎn)問(wèn)題:提示詞:our nations’】
gmat考試作文部分歷來(lái)是考生比較關(guān)注的地方,能在gmat作文里拿到不錯(cuò)的成績(jī),說(shuō)出去也是非常有面子的。其實(shí)寫(xiě)作文就是一個(gè)聯(lián)想的過(guò)程,就是大家發(fā)揮自己的想象力把自己想說(shuō)的說(shuō)出來(lái)就可以了。
例如,William Harvey(1578-1657))哈維,血液循環(huán)發(fā)現(xiàn)人,推翻了蓋倫的理論(對(duì)于這個(gè)例子,我們既可以用在質(zhì)疑精神推動(dòng)了科學(xué)的進(jìn)步,又能用在那些“偉大的思想家,科學(xué)家往往不受他們所在的時(shí)代和社會(huì)的認(rèn)可”以及“現(xiàn)在的很多成就都受過(guò)去的成就的影響”,因此這樣一個(gè)例子就能眷顧到很多話題的支持中,這樣也就提高了我們的備考效率,因?yàn)樘岣吡宋覀兯莆盏乃夭牡男詢r(jià)比,要多掌握那些很有針對(duì)性同時(shí)還不乏靈活性的例子,我們所掌握的素材就能發(fā)揮更高的效率)
William Harvey(1578-1657),English physician,who discovered the circulation of the blood and the role of the heart in propelling it,thus refuting the theories of Galen(注:質(zhì)疑精神的題目用到的有效論據(jù))and laying the foundation for modern physiology(注:過(guò)去對(duì)現(xiàn)在的影響的有效論據(jù)).
Harvey‘s De Motu Cordis subjected him to severe criticism by some contemporaries(注:偉大的科學(xué)家總不受當(dāng)時(shí)的社會(huì)認(rèn)可,思想超前),but this was more than compensated for by the later widespread recognition of his contribution.
所示的一個(gè)哈維的例子,就短短一小段話,但是這個(gè)小段落中的三個(gè)不同的地方,其實(shí)應(yīng)對(duì)了Issue里最重要的三個(gè)主題(“質(zhì)疑精神”,“參考過(guò)去,參考?xì)v史,過(guò)去對(duì)現(xiàn)在的影響”,“偉人思想超前他們所在的時(shí)代”)的寫(xiě)作的例子,而這三個(gè)主題加起來(lái)輻射了我們gmat Issue話題題庫(kù)中的將近49個(gè)題目,這種素材的性價(jià)比就太高了,是個(gè)很典型的gmat寫(xiě)作的聯(lián)想的例子。GMAT作文
GMAT考試作文聯(lián)想法要注意的是方法雖然好用,但是gmat作文基礎(chǔ)一定要扎實(shí)。所以不能為了掌握gmat寫(xiě)作技巧而忘記打牢基礎(chǔ),哪個(gè)更重要同學(xué)們一定要心理有數(shù)。
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