加拿大留學(xué)托?？荚嚌M分范文寫作干貨技巧

近日ETS外網(wǎng)放出了新版托福寫作題型--學(xué)術(shù)討論的最新10套模擬題，也上線了AI打分系統(tǒng)。我們選擇了一套題進(jìn)行了寫作&打分測(cè)試，一起來看看吧。

首先，我們來看一下題目：

Question3：Your professor is teaching a class on environmental science.Write a post responding to the professor’s question.

In your response,you should:

?l express and support your opinion

?l make a contribution to the discussion

An effective response will contain at least 100 words.You will have 10 minutes to write it.

Doctor Diaz

Nowadays,the world is facing a number of pressing environmental problems,and over the next few weeks,we'll be discussing various innovations that may help solve these problems.To begin our discussion,I'd like you to think of one global environmental problem-for example,it could be related to water,air,land,climate,biodiversity,energy,or something similar.Then explain what you think would be an effective solution to this problem.加拿大托福

Kelly

One of the major environmental problems is the limited freshwater supply in many areas of the world,which means that we need to find effective technologies to provide people with enough drinking water.One solution is to improve the technology for removing salt from seawater,which could allow us to use seawater to replenish dwindling freshwater supplies.

Paul

I think the biggest problem is the air pollution caused by the overuse of motorized vehicles.The obvious solution is for local governments to promote alternatives,like building bike lanes in cities or improving public transportation with electric buses.Both of these would be easy to implement as well.

要注意新版學(xué)術(shù)討論的寫作內(nèi)容要求是：

1）回答教授的問題；

2）內(nèi)容不能與以上兩位同學(xué)的回答相同，要對(duì)discussion有所貢獻(xiàn)。所以針對(duì)該題，我們需要寫的是一個(gè)環(huán)境問題+解決它的有效方式。而Kelly同學(xué)提到的淡水資源短缺及Paul同學(xué)提到的空氣污染問題，我們需要排除，最好寫其他的環(huán)境問題。

加拿大留學(xué)托?？荚嚌M分范文寫作干貨技巧

范文示例

鑒于官方之前給出的滿分范文長(zhǎng)達(dá)170詞+，所以本文在寫的時(shí)候詞數(shù)也偏長(zhǎng)，達(dá)到了191詞，導(dǎo)致寫作時(shí)間確實(shí)比較緊張。但其實(shí)在剩余的幾套題中，我也有嘗試寫150-160詞，也是可以拿到滿分的成績(jī)的哦。所以，各位同學(xué)不需要在詞數(shù)上特別焦慮，目前比較建議的詞數(shù)是在120-180詞之間。

整體的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)大家可以參考上圖，按照背景1句→自己觀點(diǎn)1句→論證6-8句的結(jié)構(gòu)來完成，當(dāng)然不同的立場(chǎng)和題型在結(jié)構(gòu)上還會(huì)有些許的變化，但是大體的框架變動(dòng)不大。

亮點(diǎn)詞匯與句型

最后，在語言方面，我們也需要保持詞匯使用的地道、句型的多變及語法的正確。以下是上文中的亮點(diǎn)詞匯與句型，供大家參考：

1)exacerbate v.使...惡化

2)a series of一系列的

3)pressing adj.迫切的；緊急的

4)soil contamination土壤污染

5)the indiscriminate use of...某物的濫用

6)put...high on the agenda某事是當(dāng)務(wù)之急

7)It is a consensus that...某事是一個(gè)共識(shí)

8)contribute to...有助于

在論證方面，我們依然可以采用說理論證或是舉例論證的方式來寫，在論證過程中適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)來支撐自己的觀點(diǎn)。之前學(xué)過獨(dú)立寫作主體段寫作技巧的同學(xué)們對(duì)此應(yīng)該很熟悉，還沒有了解過的同學(xué)，歡迎來新航道找我們學(xué)習(xí)哦~