加拿大研究生留學(xué)GRE Argument寫作如何形成合理的邏輯

對(duì)于想要追求高分的同學(xué)來(lái)講，通過(guò)我們縝密的分析來(lái)搭建完整的邏輯閉環(huán)是至關(guān)重要的。

現(xiàn)在，我們通過(guò)同學(xué)們的習(xí)作來(lái)引導(dǎo)大家不斷的完善我們的攻擊細(xì)節(jié)（所有段落都來(lái)自同學(xué)們?nèi)呐牡墓?jié)選）。

節(jié)選一

To begin with,we should doubt the casual relation between the dramatically increased popularity of skateboarding users and the decrease in stores’business established by the author.First of all,the stores might have many internal problems.They cannot offer a wider variety of goods and higher quality services to meet the needs of customers.Second,shops in Central Plaza might have fierce competition with nearby stores.Customers may prefer other stores so that the Central plaza might have decreased in business.Therefore,it is unconvincing that the decrease in their business is due to skateboarders.

這位同學(xué)的作文，整體結(jié)構(gòu)已經(jīng)搭建的非常好啦。但是，在細(xì)節(jié)處理上，我們可以做的更好。比如這句話：First of all,the stores might have many internal problems.They cannot offer a wider variety of goods and higher quality services to meet the needs of customers.GRE寫作邏輯

單看這句話是沒(méi)什么問(wèn)題的，但是仔細(xì)一分析，會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)：原來(lái)Central Plaza是很受歡迎的，只是現(xiàn)在不好了。但是如果只寫服務(wù)不好，產(chǎn)品多樣性不高就會(huì)不合理，因?yàn)楫吘乖?jīng)這家shopping mall很受歡迎，所以它曾經(jīng)的服務(wù)和產(chǎn)品應(yīng)該是沒(méi)問(wèn)題的。因而我們就需要解釋為什么商場(chǎng)會(huì)越做越差。

所以我們改成了：First of all,the out-of-date internal management could impede stores in Central Plaza from improving their service and products since it was immersed in its past glory time.Therefore,those disappointed customers could choose other nearby shopping malls,instead of Central Plaza.

這樣改成之后，我們就可以看出來(lái)為什么現(xiàn)在差了呢？因?yàn)樗麄兂撩杂谝郧暗某晒?，不思進(jìn)取啦。這樣我們就把商場(chǎng)現(xiàn)在服務(wù)不好這件事情解釋清楚了。

這個(gè)就叫邏輯閉環(huán)。如果大家在考試中可以注意到這樣的邏輯閉環(huán)，并把它解釋清楚，不僅僅會(huì)收獲更多的字?jǐn)?shù)，也會(huì)拿到更高的分?jǐn)?shù)。

節(jié)選二

Moreover,there is a threshold problem involves the content of no Palean boats have been found in the river.The author regards no Palean boats have been found as the same as there were not any boats here before.However,from any aspects,no Palean boats have been discovered in the river and there were totally not any boats here in the past are wholly different.First of all,the row material of boats that Palean used could be wood they cut from tree which could be eroded and vanished as time went by.Besides,it’s likely that there were boats from Litho instead,passing the river and trading goods with Palean.In short,without ruling out those mentioned discrepancies,it is impossible to conclude no found Palean boats is equal to not any boats were once here.

加拿大研究生留學(xué)GRE Argument寫作如何形成合理的邏輯

這篇練習(xí)來(lái)自A166，這道題目本身難度較高。整體來(lái)看，這名同學(xué)做的很不錯(cuò)，但在細(xì)節(jié)上還需要進(jìn)一步打磨。

比如這句：First of all,the row material of boats that Palean used could be wood they cut from tree which could be eroded and vanished as time went by.這句可以通過(guò)添加更多的細(xì)節(jié)讓我們的論述更加完整。

首先，為什么船只能是木頭做的呢？因?yàn)楫?dāng)時(shí)技術(shù)不夠先進(jìn)，沒(méi)有別的辦法。而木頭又容易被微生物降解，所以現(xiàn)在就找不到了。

改完這句話就可以寫成：First of all,in the ancient time,people did not have highly developed technology and only used wood to make boats,which was easily decomposed by microorganism.都是一句話，但是第二句表達(dá)更具有細(xì)節(jié)，解釋的更到位，這個(gè)就叫邏輯閉環(huán)。加拿大研究生GRE

不管是Argument，還是Issue，我們都是采用五段式，除去開(kāi)頭段和結(jié)尾段，中間三個(gè)中心段落是我們得分的核心。

對(duì)于Argument來(lái)講，多樣的攻擊細(xì)節(jié)和扎實(shí)的邏輯解釋可以讓我們對(duì)作者的攻擊看起來(lái)更加合理，因而可以為我們贏得更多的分?jǐn)?shù)。

在這個(gè)過(guò)程中，語(yǔ)言水平的高低并不會(huì)帶來(lái)本質(zhì)的影響（當(dāng)然我們要盡可能的減少語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤并保證表意清晰，只是可以不使用相對(duì)比較復(fù)雜的句子而已）。